Plz give me your opinion on this letter that im sending to this Girl?

take out the "i no that if someone doesn't like you then they just don't" and put in I am not sure why you have been ignoring me. I was nervous on i first date so i know that i didn't make a good impression because i was shy, but i really like (list things that you like about her)and take out the part about ppl that just like peopl for their looks and take out i thought that you were still pretty and tell her that you think that she is pretty abd dont tell her you showed this to anyone else and ask her why she has been ignoring you?